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« on: November 27, 2010, 06:02:46 pm »
i want to show u guys a poem which i have written, then i will introduce myself
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« Reply #1 on: November 27, 2010, 06:10:15 pm »
My life turned out such a way,
I'm in grief am unable to say.

To whom should I ask to whom should I hug,
my life is dead it really sucks.

I'm waiting at the same place you left me forever.
though I know I can get you never.

The candle of wish is burning in my heart,
since the day we got apart.
 
Just be happy wherever you go is my only desire,
your wishes comes true is what I aspire.

Your one drop of tear will make me die,
even in worst moment please dont cry.

I am your shadow, will follow you forever in darkness,
since this world means nothing to me more than your happiness

   :think


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« Reply #2 on: November 27, 2010, 06:14:28 pm »
its a really good one  

but please post it in freedom of speech otherwise mods will move it

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« Reply #3 on: November 27, 2010, 06:27:07 pm »
real name                                   Phunsukh Wangdhu
college                                          ICE, MUMBAI
course                                          MECHANICAL ENGG

school                                          VALLEY'S HIGH

rank                                            16

marks(pcm if you want)             94%

                                     

 



I AM an ICE ian, but may be called as a waste of this precious seat of  as i am not focussed   and i dont know if i want to be a engineer or not.
I have never fantasised impossible things which could be made possible with the help of science nor i was ever interested in the working or construction of any scientific equipment or anything science related. I never even participated in my school quizzes or model  competitions. Even then i got a pretty good aieee rank. I dont know and I am very  confused if I aspire to be an engineer or not. But I am an nsit ian and cant risk  leaving that precious seat  and go to some other institution,.

Maybe, it is the drawback of indian education system. The way things are taught here are way different than in US.  I mean even before the beginning of experiment, we are told the result. what is the use and fun of doing that experiment than. And that happens in ICE, a top college, just guess what is the plight of others..

but i know i keep a very unique point of view on different things and i am very capable of doing something big.

Aishwarya rai was an architect , ended up being a superstar.. Dhoni was passionate about football, and is now the captain of indian cricket team.
Abraham lincoln fiancee's died, he failed in business twice, he had a nervous breakdown and was defeated in eight elections.

So,i expect that life will get on track in due time and  aur kisi na kisi tarah zindagi apni manzil dhoondh hi legi..


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« Reply #4 on: November 27, 2010, 08:35:37 pm »
welcome on techbits..its nice to see some1 fom outside IPU getting active here :angel:

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« Reply #5 on: December 05, 2010, 01:38:02 pm »
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« Reply #7 on: December 05, 2010, 10:03:22 pm »
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« Reply #8 on: December 05, 2010, 10:11:22 pm »
Quote from: herecomesthebiggie on November 27, 2010, 06:10:15 pm
My life turned out such a way,
I'm in grief am unable to say.

To whom should I ask to whom should I hug,
my life is dead it really sucks.

I'm waiting at the same place you left me forever.
though I know I can get you never.

The candle of wish is burning in my heart,
since the day we got apart.
 
Just be happy wherever you go is my only desire,
your wishes comes true is what I aspire.

Your one drop of tear will make me die,
even in worst moment please dont cry.

I am your shadow, will follow you forever in darkness,
since this world means nothing to me more than your happiness

   :think


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EXCELLENT.............don't stop here keep giving such good material ....  
« Last Edit: December 05, 2010, 10:16:17 pm by JIJA-JI »

 

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